Hav you ever been deprieved of something you felt was yours ?
Hav you felt lost for words when you needed them most ?
Hav you felt numb at times when the obstinate mind refused to budge?
Hav you lost battles and carried on in hope of winning the war?
I have and I believe everybody has too.
The world is there to be won,
don't lose it without trying.
The life is there to be lived,
don't die,continue prying.
Path is downtrodden and obstacles
stand on your way to zenith.
Either stay down mesmerized
or simply conquer your mind.
Stand tall and smash the life's
googly forty rows back.
Be the finicky who gained his
identity by striving continuously.
Don't lose heart this time if you lose.
Remember as this sophomore poet says,
The biggest losers are those who
gave it up without trying.
Abhinav(9 th sept,06)
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6 comments:
Its good....
So dont loose hope is the morale of teh story......
hi prashant,gr8 to hear frm u man,gud u keep in touch,well yea in my case it's definitely the morale of the story,u know kinda "been there done that" sort of a case for me,one shud neva loose hope.....
cya .keep in touch.
temme one more thng bro,r u on orkut too ?
Hey you know whats the speciality about this poems of urs...
when i read it gain todya...i was agin filled with some kinda feeling and that gives me strength...
really i admire you....
u write really good...
i am on orkut.... :-)
Search Prashant dev.......
i am at no 3 ,if in between nobody comes there ;-)
thx for the appreciation,tough it isnt the best piece i'v written.
cya
abhi
but anyways i like it much...
means i will be gifted with some more great posts in coming time...
i am waiting for u bro.....
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